Friday, 10 August 2018

How much fat is in your chips By Ava


  1. Hi Ava,

    Thanks for sharing your chip experiment with us. One tip - when you're presenting your writing using Slides, please make sure all your words fit on the slide so your audience can read them clearly. Do you know why the liquid wasn't as purple at the end of the experiment?


    Miss H

  2. Hi Miss H, Thx for commening, I will be sure to fix it

  3. Hi Ava
    This is an amazing piece of work.
    I like how you made you work interesting.
    For something to think about you could maybe make your words smaller so they can all fit on the page.
    From Tulsi


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