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Hi AvaThis was a really interesting piece of work I enjoyed reading it.Next time you could add full stops at every sentience and also add capital letter for the word I.From Tulsi:)
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Hi Ava
ReplyDeleteThis was a really interesting piece of work I enjoyed reading it.
Next time you could add full stops at every sentience and also add capital letter for the word I.
From Tulsi:)