Friday 3 August 2018

Papakeia

5 comments:

  1. Hey Ava

    Great Job
    How Long Did This Take?
    Why did you decide to do this?

    Come Check out my blog at http://lakebrunneredenw.blogspot.com/
    From Eden lake Brunner School

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  2. Hi Ava
    I really like your animation, I used to do them on slides but them I learnt scratch, maybe if you want to you could try it? Any way if you want to please check out my blog at lakebrunnerbridgetr.blogspot.com

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  3. Hi Ava
    This is a really good piece of work it made me laugh.
    next time on page 47 you wrote thew instead you could write few.
    From Tulsi.

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  4. Hi Ava
    Your slides look cool but I love this one and some of it is a bit funny I start to laugh when the man goes on the whale next time maybe put it a little shorter so it is not that long but I love it.

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  5. Hi Ava you did a great job on your pictures and your writing, I like them.
    next time maybe put it a little shorter so it is not so long but I love It.

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